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Old 24-04-2008, 04:52   #20 (permalink)
JonoMarshall
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He can always change the colours...

Paddy's is nice, work an execution out of it. Your latest one has potential too... I'd make the dot of the eye into a more of a smashed pins visual perhaps? Also you need to find a way to bring it together a bit more, it feels loose as if the ball holes, text and underline are all too seperate.

Why not do an execution where the ball has travelled through the dot of the eye (the pins) towards the viewer... it might look quite dynamic. (Again you could work the smashed pins/crown combo in?)
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