[thastrom]

Originally Posted by Benjamin

Many of your "swirls" are a bit jaggy, they should be smoothe. They are also too detailed and thin, if the logo should work in small sizes. All letters are tied together, except the "S" in Strike and the "K" in Kings, which look like a mistake. The circle, which I belive should symbolise a bowlingball, needs some holes in it, so it is more clear what it is... It also looks like you have used two slightly different blacks, one for the ball, and one for the rest... And where are the "team colours", which is a part of the makeover parameters?

I was just giving you an idea of how it looks like, then if you think it's an good idea I would ad the details.