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Old 13-04-2008, 15:49   #8 (permalink)
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I'm sorry if you expected us to be dazzled. If you can't take the heat, etc...

First things first. I know it's a template, but I don't think it's a good place to start. First thing you need to do is get hold of the content, styling lorem ipsum isn't going to help you design.

There is no cohesion between the main content area, the right column and navigation. The whole composition lacks a focal point.

There is no grid. Left column is indented about 5 pixels from the header.

I can count at least 4 different typefaces.

Icons are from a different story.

Text on the live chat bubble is misaligned. What's with the copyright notice in the header? Centred text in the boxes on the left contributes to the overall messy look.

Quote:
<div id="navbar">
<a href="#">Home</a>
<a href="#">Shared</a>
<a href="#">Reseller</a>
<a href="#">Dedicated</a>
<a href="#">Contact</a>
</div>

This is not a way to build a navigation bar (btw the background image gets chopped off on the right side). Code overall could be improved.
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