Oh christ thats a lot of copy in an ident. Take him out and shoot him.
Of those only 9 doesn't make my eyes bleed from the overload of type, I'd honestly suggest dropping doing anything particularly creative with the type as there's simply way too much.
Would develop a mark to go with the text and simply set the text cleanly, even in 9 the type treatment has a bit too much going on it's tugging my eyes left and right and up and down.
edit - infact number 4 is the cleanest and nicest copy wise - in hindsight, just needs work on what goes with it.