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josse · 02-02-2008, 20:15

I like the idea behind it, but the outcome needs some work in my opinion. i don't like that font, so maybe consider another. If not make your strokes a bit 'fatter'.

You should us fewer spots to create the trail. I would use bigger and fewer spots with a transparency. The trail is too much on the foreground.

02-02-2008, 20:15	#2 (permalink)
josse Registered User Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 26	I like the idea behind it, but the outcome needs some work in my opinion. i don't like that font, so maybe consider another. If not make your strokes a bit 'fatter'. You should us fewer spots to create the trail. I would use bigger and fewer spots with a transparency. The trail is too much on the foreground.