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Old 28-02-2004, 18:23   #19 (permalink)
seanf
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Join Date: May 2003
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I noticed a few unforced errors in the 'Me' bit:

'Including Fox...' should be part of the preceeding sentence.

No comma after 'Printing'

'Fit well into and team'?

Tut tut, kids of today...

Sean
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