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Old 26-01-2004, 13:40   #6 (permalink)
andycogbill
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I'm not sure about the "click-ability" of your links - the page feels very static and, in my opinion, doesn't encourage the user to stay and have a few at your site. With that huge image on the left, reading your "message" seems futile and unexciting, and I feel like the eye keeps going back to the image.

My suggestion would be to enhance contrast for the words that matter, and to kill the verbiage and go for some key words that look really enticing. It'll be hard with this layout, I realize, but hey, our job is to solve problems.

Try to pass on your message a little clearer and people might feel like hanging at your site for a bit: think IMPACT.
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