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Old 07-10-2007, 08:00   #4 (permalink)
Limbo
Another turn.
 
Join Date: Feb 2005
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It's not too bad - quite like the colour and layout but much like the rest it needs a host of small tweaks to get it too work - your typography ain't great - the alignment of titles and sub titles is inconsistent - the leading/kerning isn't handsome either. Your grid is a little skew too - lot's of mis alignment, causing lumps and bumps. And the orange part of your cube motifs perspective is off to my eye.

+ m o n t e s s o r i - m a r k e t i n g under the logo looks v.shabby.
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