It suggests to me that your type skills are some what rudimentary. Therefore it fails instantly.
Typography needs subtle sophistication (especially when it is trying to sell skills such as a designer/visual communicator), unfortunately your cards do not have this.
I suggest looking at your type choice, placement and leading etc and see how it affects the negative space withing the card.
I am sure with a liitle research and foresight you can push these miles as the logo has some strength (it is fairly technicolor though) but needs to be unified with the type and space.