Looking for a quick crit, needs be done by noon tomorrow, it's nearly there but not quite. Can't put my finger on it, think I've been staring at it too long.
There's somthing that's not quite working with the coppy, tell me what you think.
I've blanked out the logo, out of respect for the client. Also I'm not going to tell you what it is, I'm hoping you can tell without an explenation...
Here goes...
Edit: the 3rd image on the 4th one, is going to be of a kebab, which is coming via special delivery later! And obviously the actual version is 300res