Hmm. I'm really sorry, it does nothing for me.
It's just commas, doesn't say anything about complaints...
The first one is somewhat ok, but you need to play a little more with it.
One more thing: consider posting a jpeg/png/gif. pdfs are very annoying...
EDIT:
vBCODE:
http://www.designerstalk.com/forums/misc.php?do=bbcode